[Blue Confusion]

Not technically anime-related, but DA is deader than Lynk's roadkill and I could use some feedback. I'm trying to figure out how to draw clouds in pencil so that I can finally finish a picture. Here's my first crack:

http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e180/b...sketch.jpg
(Forgive the strange lighting, my camera kinda screwed this sketch)

Any feedback, constructive criticism, etc is very welcome. Take me to pieces on this one, I need to improve ^^

[Maverick]

that's a good start ^^
the only clouds I have ever draw are on my wild horse piece and they are pretty regular and simple, not so proud of them, so I don't have many clues, but you can use a white clean eraser for shaping the places were the cloud is shiny and white, those "pencil shaped" erasers are useful... but since I don't have one I use a common brick shaped white eraser, when It gets too round and worn I cut it with a knife so I can get a good edge for "draw" with it.
Using a clean tissue for smudge (sp?) the shading making it look more uniform might help, I usually smudge the sky since I can't shade in a really uniform way.
Use clouds pics for reference and experiment a lot XD

[Blue Confusion]

Cheers Mav ^^ The tissue tip is worth trying out