6 May 2008, 1:08 PM
Here's the fifth page in my practice comic series. I'm still working on the basics, but I feel like I'm starting to grasp some of those basics.
http://wbd.deviantart.com/art/Thin-Lines...5-84864152
I think I'm going to look through the layouts and see if I can work on framing issues. I think the next page will be alright, but pages after that need to have more character and less white space in the frame, I think. I do need to leave enough room for text, of course.
http://wbd.deviantart.com/art/Thin-Lines...5-84864152
I think I'm going to look through the layouts and see if I can work on framing issues. I think the next page will be alright, but pages after that need to have more character and less white space in the frame, I think. I do need to leave enough room for text, of course.